The tables below show people's reasons for giving up smoking, and when they intend to give up. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given tables illustrate individuals' motives for stopping smoking and provide details about the time that they intend to do that.
Overall
, the most noticeable factor which pushes smokers to give up smoking is that it is better for general health. Linking Words
Moreover
, the figure of addicted people who intend to give up smoking for the next 6 months is considerably more than the other ones.
71% of people who want to give up are trying to improve their general health. Linking Words
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, financial considerations and decreasing the chance of getting smoking-related diseases share 31 and 25 per cent of individuals' motives respectively. Linking Words
Also
, the pressure from family and heart problems are the other factors that impact people's decision to abandon cigarettes.
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the second table, 71% of smokers intend to give up Linking Words
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just 12% of individuals were planning to do that in the next month. Linking Words
Furthermore
, about a third of questioned smokers intend to abandon cigarettes in the next 6 months and 46% of them smoke fewer than 10 times a day.Linking Words
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