Local caches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia, 2004 and 2014.

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The table illustrates information about the fresh fish caught in metric tons by the residents and imported to Perth City of Australia from 2004 to 2014.

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, in the ,beginning year, the least metric oodles were caught by the locals.

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, in the following year, fewer were imported into the urban centre. In 2004, the locals caught only 2,677.7 fish and made a total of 3,142.2 metric oodles, which was the lowest throughout the period.

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, the least catches were imported in 2005. After that, the number of residents catching up rose gradually and experienced the highest growth of 8136.2 million grams in 2008. In the same way, importing fluctuated throughout the interval and accounted for 1227.3 megagrams in 2012, which

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accounted for the highest import ever made. Turning to local, it went up till 2009, being 8494MT(highest),and fell down and began to vary, and

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ended up being 5814.7 in 2014. Correspondingly, local

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imports made up 5031.9 and 582.7 respectively.

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Local caches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia, 2004 and 2014.

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The government should invest more money in teaching science than in other subjects for a country development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays online shopping is extremely popular. Discuss the impact of it on the environment and on people who lost their jobs because of it.

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