The graph shows the types of games people play in some country over a 7 year time period.
The bar charts which were from The NPD Group revealed the
video
game playing
trends in America. The data was published on MarketingCharts.co. in October 2021.
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game-playing
Moreover
, the time
period was from 2019 to 2021.
The percentage of Americans involving in video
games
enhanced in 2020 but decreased in 2021. On the contrary
, the average of playing hours per week
gradually increased through the 3 years. There were 73% people
in the U.S.A. played Change preposition
of people
video
games
and averagely spent 12.7 hours per week
in 2019. One year later, video
game players in the United States grow to 79% while
the time
expenditure was raised to 14.8 hours for one week
. Although
the proportion of American players reduced to 76% in 2021, they invested more time
on
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in
video
games
than the
past two years.
We can tell from the two diagrams that the reliance Change preposition
in the
of
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on
video
games
expanded according to
the growth of average time
cost per week
even though the target population did not have a big difference.Submitted by s99104032 on
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