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many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar. which causes many health problems. sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

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In recent years, People leading a hectic lifestyle.
Due to
this
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 our community is always busy and they do not have enough time to make healthy meals for themselves.
Thus
 always go for fast food. Those quick meals and beverages contain high levels of sugar which causes much harm to human health. Increasing the fare of sugary
products
 does not make any sense to pupils. In
this
 ,essay I will explore the reasons why I disagree with
this
 and try to draw some conclusions. The first and foremost reason is, If society gets addicted to sugary
products
 somehow they will tend to buy them. Nowadays the public is more fond of soft drinks, desserts and chocolates. There are some, who don't take care of the price since they are financially stable. A high expenditure tag doesn't cause any influence on them.
Secondly
 poor public will be poorer. Since some essential
products
also
 wrap with sweets.
For instance
 bread, pasta, vegetables and some fruits. folks should buy these to lead a healthy life circle.In
this
 regard, Increasing the sales payment will disrupt their lifestyle.
On the other hand
, We have to concern an alternative solution to
this
 problem. Relevent officers can arrange awareness programmes, teachers can advise their children, and doctors can emphasize about high intake of sugar. These will help the public to get a good knowledge about sugars. To sum it up, making sugary items too expensive doesn't have any impact on society rather than making rich people buy them regardless of money and making poor communities poorer. The government may organize useful programmes and giving information about the highly sugary
products
 will be helpful to stop buying these items.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sugar consumption
  • health problems
  • manufactured food and drink products
  • encourage
  • expensive
  • reduce
  • effectively
  • discourage
  • tight budget
  • purchasing
  • disproportionately
  • lower-income individuals
  • healthier food choices
  • demand
  • regardless
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