the table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior managment in three companies between 1960 and the year 2000.
The provided table demonstrates the proportion of
women
who joined the seniority at a managerial position in different three companies over around 40 years past.
Overall
, it is evident that over the period the three companies experienced a gradual altitude in women
's participation
.
As can be seen, it is noteworthy that the company
Eldan LTD
recorded the lowest and the highest participation
percentage on the overall
chart. While
in the first 10 ,years the number of women
was just 3%, but they substantially hit the highest participation
in 2015 at 64%.
Furthermore
, while
in the first two ,decades the most popular company
was Finsbury Ltd
whereas
the women
participated at 14%, 15%, and 16% respectively, the pattern completely reversed for Eldan Ltd
company
and women
contributed the highest number of seniors in the second half of the period. Indeed, women
's participation
in Bamfoth Ltd
was tediously increasing until 2000 at 17%, but the company
abruptly jumped to 46% in 2015.Submitted by alaan0542 on
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