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the table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior managment in three companies between 1960 and the year 2000.

the table below shows the percentage participation of women in senior managment in three companies between 1960 and the year 2000.
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The provided table demonstrates the proportion of
women
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 who joined the seniority at a managerial position in different three companies over around 40 years past.
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, it is evident that over the period the three companies experienced a gradual altitude in
women
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's
participation
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. As can be seen, it is noteworthy that the
company
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 Eldan
LTD
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 recorded the lowest and the highest
participation
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 percentage on the
overall
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 chart.
While
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 in the first 10 ,years the number of
women
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 was just 3%, but they substantially hit the highest
participation
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 in 2015 at 64%.
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,
while
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 in the first two ,decades the most popular
company
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 was Finsbury
Ltd
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whereas
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 the
women
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 participated at 14%, 15%, and 16% respectively, the pattern completely reversed for Eldan
Ltd
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company
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 and
women
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 contributed the highest number of seniors in the second half of the period. Indeed,
women
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's
participation
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 in Bamfoth
Ltd
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 was tediously increasing until 2000 at 17%, but the
company
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 abruptly jumped to 46% in 2015.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words women, participation, company, ltd with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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