The map show the changes that took place in the bookstore before and after 2000.
The Tow maps
illustrates
planned development to changes in library sectors from the 2000 year to now.
Change the verb form
illustrate
overall
, before the change in the bookstore, the largest section of the library contained fiction in the northern part. Also
. it did not increase or decrease in size. only some places were replaced.
To according the maps, in the center were three shelves of Art, hobbies, and Cookery. After that, it united with the fantasy department in the north. While
the middle has become tables instead
. However
. the northwest of before has the room fiction and then
become to
now-fiction.
In the end Change preposition
apply
in
the South was non-fiction. before the big change in the bookshop, and Change preposition
apply
after
this
had become the cafe.
To sum
up
the western part has not changed at all.Add a comma
,up
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