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The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions.
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The presented pie charts illustrate various percentages
on
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of
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 the world’s
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forest
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forests
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 in 5 separate regions. In common,
Africa
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is placed
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 the highest
percent
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in
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of
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 world
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forest
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forests
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 followed by North
America
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.
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 there are not huge differences among forests included in each region, the amount of
timber - growing
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timber-growing
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 is quite not similar. In the first pie
charts
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chart
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, 25% of the world’s
forest
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 is in North
America
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, which is nearly the same as
Africa
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 at 27%. Following these two is the percentage in Europe, with 18%
forest
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 covered, and decreasing to 16%
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 14% by South
Africa
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 and Asia. The second one,
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, with the most
timber- growing
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timber-growing
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, North
America
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 is placed the highest in comparison. The reverse is the case of
Africa
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, with only 9% of
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forest
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the forest
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 being used for timber.
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,
one fifth
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 of Europe is precisely the same as Asia at 18%.
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, South
Africa
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 is placed second after North
America
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 with 23% of timber.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, africa, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comparative analysis
  • forest distribution
  • global regions
  • percentage share
  • forested areas
  • ecological significance
  • relative density
  • regional distribution
  • topography
  • human activities
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