The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forests in five different regions.
The presented pie charts illustrate various percentages
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the world’s
forest
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forests
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in 5 separate regions. In common,
Africa
is placed
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the highest
percent
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in
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world
forest
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followed by North
America
.
While
there are not huge differences among forests included in each region, the amount of
timber - growing
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is quite not similar. In the first pie
charts
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, 25% of the world’s
forest
is in North
America
, which is nearly the same as
Africa
at 27%. Following these two is the percentage in Europe, with 18%
forest
covered, and decreasing to 16%
then
14% by South
Africa
and Asia. The second one,
in contrast
, with the most
timber- growing
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, North
America
is placed the highest in comparison. The reverse is the case of
Africa
, with only 9% of
forest
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the forest
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being used for timber.
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,
one fifth
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of Europe is precisely the same as Asia at 18%.
Lastly
, South
Africa
is placed second after North
America
with 23% of timber.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, africa, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • comparative analysis
  • forest distribution
  • global regions
  • percentage share
  • forested areas
  • ecological significance
  • relative density
  • regional distribution
  • topography
  • human activities
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