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The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
#enquiries #tourist #information #office #city #period
The provided line chat illustrates how many
enquires
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received
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were received
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 by the Tourist Information Office in a town by three
kind
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kinds
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 of
enquires
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 (in person, by telephone, by
letter
/
email
) over a six-month period in 2011.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the
enquires
 by conversation method increased,
while
enquires
that
is
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are
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 received by
letter
/
email
 decreased throughout the given period. Regarding the two
kind
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 of
enquires
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enquiries
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 which required communication two ways. In January
telephone
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the telephone
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 was the most popular which accounted for 900 and still rose over the given period at 1400.
Furthermore
,
although
in
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apply
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person were become the lowest at the start, people tend to
used
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 direct conversation, which is shown
exceed
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to exceed
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 other type of
enquires
 in April and reached
to
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apply
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the
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a
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 peak in June at 1900. In terms of the rest
enquires
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 tools received
was
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were
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 by
letter
/
email
. Even though at the start it
shown
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showed
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 the second rank,
people
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the people
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 who used
letter
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letters
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/
email
 fell steadily until the end from almost 800 to around 400.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • in person
  • by letter/email
  • by telephone
  • general trend
  • six-month period
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • decline
  • peak
  • fluctuations
  • monthly data
  • comparison
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