The graph below shows the average monthly chnage in the prices of three metal during 2014.
The supplied line graph depicts the percentage of how the
music
was purchased in seven-year
period. A glance at the graph reveals that Add an article
a seven-year
the seven-year
while
the majority of people used to buy CDs in 2011, stream buying became the most popular method among listeners.
in 2001, around 55% of individuals preferred to purchase CDs while
nearly 35% of them downloaded music
and a mere 6% used streams. in 2014, Downloading became the most popular way of purchasing music
by 42%, and CD buyers were just 38%. Stream methods were the least popular among music
buyers till 2016. After 2014 downloading saw a rise from 42% to 30% in 2018.
The percentage of streaming users almost doubled from 20% in 2015 to 40% in 2018. After 2016 CD purchasing became the least popular approach by less than 30%. By 2017, streaming became the most popular form among music
lovers. Although
the number of people using streaming methods to purchase music
increased in the next year to more than 30%, the number of downloaders and CD buyers saw a drop.Submitted by Nima on
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