Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs. To what extent do you agree?
While
it is obvious that foreigners should follow other’s
countries' behaviour and Change noun form
other
rules
, they have to respect
them too. I believe that it depends on the situation.
One reason why people
should respect
other people
’s cultures is that they can understand them and get assistance from locals easily. If they saw a tourist give them enough respect
by following their culture, they would not hesitate to help them, even though the consequences are severe. For example
, some citizens could help tourists who seem similar to them more than other tourists. Thus
, by following their habits, visitors could earn local love, and they could be treated very well. To put it simply, by respecting the country’s rules
and being humble and kind to the locals, they will be appreciated, and they will try their best to assist them.
However
international visitors should not go far to please and impress the locals, especially, if that would come against their beliefs and maybe their religion. Furthermore
, people
must respect
others. People
who do not respect
themselves, will not be respected by others. A lot of people
will avoid those who over-imitate others without thinking. For instance
, religions, such
as Islam have prohibited drinking for good reasons, so many individuals around the world, don't drink. Hence
, some religions may allow drinking, while
some of them don’t. In this
situation, people
must follow their rules
, instead
of following others’ rules
.
In conclusion, it is nice to follow other nations' rules
and practices, but without breaking their rules
. If people
balanced their culture and other cultures, they could communicate better and make a meaningful impact.Submitted by s_syedy on
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