Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Other believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over who

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people have the responsibility for

environment

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.

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some claim that preserving the surrounding depends on the governor, the opposites make a statement that it is every

citizens’

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one. I would contend that it is optimal to combine both ideas. Without a shadow of a doubt, the state acts

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precursor in conserving the

environment

, especially

air

pollution.

This

is because

,

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they own strong power in each nation.

Moreover

, they can give potential

rule

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to penalize wrong-doers that pose a threat

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the atmosphere.

For instance

,

Viet

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the Viet

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Nam government introduce green taxes and tax incentives to encourage eco-friendly.

Moreover

, they

also

raise the public’s ecological awareness

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social platforms like: Facebook or Tiktok.

Hence

, the governor has an important role in preventing ait contamination from people’s lives.

While

the beneficial advantages of the state

are widely acknowledge

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, dwellers have to be

incharge

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in charge

of increasing the

air

quality. Since their daily lives

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one the most alarming reasons

of

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this

air

contamination.

Therefore

, they have to adjust their negative habits to

environment

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.

For example

, Vietnam experienced

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rocketing rate of car ownership of citizens. A wealth of individual vehicles dispose of

the

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lare

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large

amount of carbon dioxide.

Therefore

, nowadays, they change

transportation

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their transportation

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habit

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habits

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from private

car

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cars

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to electric

bus

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.

Thus

, the dwellers have to have responsibility for the

environment

. In conclusion, it is necessary for both

governor

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governors

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and citizens

have

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the role of decreasing the carbon

footprin

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footprint

in the

air

by

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their realistic acts.