Some people feel that it is necessary to test new medicines on animals, while other people feel that this is not fair on animals and not necessary. Discuss both views ad give your opinion.

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Nowadays,
due to
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continious
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continuous
improvements in the pharmacy sector, a lot of new and effective
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are being invented, which
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not only limited to
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use but are used for
animals
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aswell
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as well
.
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, some people believe new pharmacies should be tested on
animals
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,
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others strongly disagree
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statement and consider it useless. In
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essay, I will discuss both of these perspectives alongside will
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give my opinion on why new
medicines
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shall be allowed to test on
animals
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.
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with, we will see whether is there any need to test new
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on
animals
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The answer is simply yes. Because we know if someone has to select between animal and human, they will
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go for
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. So, in the same
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when new
medicines
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are produced, rather than directly testing
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on
humans
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and putting their life in danger it is good to test
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on
animals
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instead
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. In
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way, we can have
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if the medicine is authentic or not and is okay to be used for
humans
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or not.
For instance
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, if we look at the famous Kashif Afiridi's research work, where he claimed his medicine can bring relief from your headache in 5 mins and when given to a 20 years adult, after a
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the man was found dead in
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this
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reason
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it is never recommended to experiment on
humans
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directly, as
animals
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should be prioritized before
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such
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experiments to reduce the level of risk.
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, those who disagree to perform
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on
animals
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are
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not wrong. As
animals
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life are equally important to that of individuals.
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, before any experimentation
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performed it is the duty of
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the researcher
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to make sure his/her product is harmless and if any harm is done to
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the animal
an animal
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animal
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animals
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during experimentation
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they should be held responsible for it and heavily fined. If we take
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example of the
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Australian
researcher, how
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because
of his silly mistake
costed
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10 goats their lives. And later he was jailed for a year and
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was liable to pay a hefty fine.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • efficacy
  • unethical
  • alternative methods
  • in vitro testing
  • computer modeling
  • misleading conclusions
  • strict regulations
  • humane
  • moral concerns
  • advancements in technology
  • viable alternatives
  • phase out
  • medical research
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