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government has limited fund for postgraduate research therefore this money should be used for useful scientific projects rather than less useful subjects...do you agree or disagree ?

#government #fund #research #money #projects #subjects
Research is a very important measurement to accumulate knowledge in a specific subject and
thus
 contribute to
improve
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 our lifestyle. But sometimes getting the right fund for it becomes very difficult as
now-a-days
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government
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the government
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 has limited their expenses. So I think we should use the money carefully and spend it
in
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 a priority basis. I agree with
above
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 topics and will discuss
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 for
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 my agreement side. First of all,
we
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every one
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 knows that science is an inevitable subject which is compulsory for our day-to-day living, We can't
not
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live a day without it, so, I have to
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 that the fund must spend
for
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 scientific research
at
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first. Because, if we gain more ideas related
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 technology,
internet
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the internet
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,
computer
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computers
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 etc we could improve our
lives
 dramatically.
For example
, the
improve
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 technology of mobile
phone
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has changed our daily living drastically within
few
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 years.
Secondly
, medicine is another vital area and we can not survive without it. By doing more
reserchant
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researching
 about it we could not only improve
lives
 but
also
 save many
lives
.
On the other hand
,
othe
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other
 non-
sciefific
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scientific
 subjects like
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art, history, literature etc
also
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vitaly
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vital
 related
with
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 human life and without these many factors of our
lives
 would be affected badly. So, we can not neglect it too. To be concluded, I support the statement that the finance given by the government authorities should consider first the areas of most important scientific subjects. And by using
this
 a nation or a country could
be
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become much wealthier and happier.
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also
 mark that if there
is
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 enough funds available or some private companies could contribute
then
offcourse
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of course
off course
 other subjects should not be avoided.
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