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Some people believe that teaching ethics to children is responsibility of teachers. Others say that this responsibility lies with parents.

#people #ethics #children #responsibility #teachers #parents
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There is no denying the fact that the purpose cause of learning kinds is debatable ,Several humans have views about learning kids' duty ethics teachers, personally,l agree with
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 learn it from family .
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 of all, there are many mankind say to learn children job families because the kid would copy action Mather or father ,what will if imagine memory
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 who writing parents him ,they are writing respect ,loving ,bullying,animal, the fact the one-year-old
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 is essential for building character kind it is important to provide the
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 excellent environment for support skills him and create talents ,the
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 open world should prepare children for it ,
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, recently competition found to kids who have learned hours before
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 are more intelligent than those do not have learned Second,
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,a lot of individuals thought to responsible for
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 because they are busy working so that doing pay big sums for
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 suggests wrong?case the kids without inside as blind do anything in life
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 of accidents as kidnapped they don’t have any knowledge,not just only study significant But warning about strangers with provided information as a number police ,
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,exhibit report to percentage accidents children have to 50% in Us
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 trust. In conclusion,
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,many people say to responsible learning teachers,In my opinion, Avery's
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 day of life him because teaching
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 and foremost.
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