You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter - correct the information in the article - explain whey it is important for the magazine to give correct information - suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope

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letter finds you well. I recently read the article published in your magazine in the July 2023 Issue about the town of Edenberg which consists of a factual inaccuracy. As a resident of a town, I am writing

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letter to bring your attention to

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matter. In one of the paragraphs, it is mentioned that the Old Fort in the central town is from the First

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War, which is incorrect.

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it was only partially renovated before

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War I, the fort is more than 200 years old and constructed at the time of the Civil War, which you can verify from the local authority too. It is crucial to convey the right information so that people around the

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know the true value of

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monument. It is our pride that attracts thousands of tourists a year from all over the

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contributing to the livelihood of nearby residents. Any misinformation might make the site less appealing to tourists, resulting in lower visitors, which might be devastating for us. I request you to give your immediate attention to resolve

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matter. In my opinion, a notice or a follow-up article in your upcoming issue would be the best to rectify the situation.

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, words from authorities

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as local administrators and archaeologists will be even better for convincing people. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Raj Kumar