The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shop that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shop that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
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The line chart illustrates the
number
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of
shops
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that closed and the
number
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of new
shops
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that opened in a country from 2011 to 2018. From an
overall
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perspective, both the closure and opening trends of
shops
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generally decreased during the
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surveyed.
In addition
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, after an expected trend, the
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of closed
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becomes common
at the end
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of the
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. 8,500
shops
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were opened in 2011, with a subsequent dramatic fall to almost 4,000 in 2012, followed by a noticeable fluctuation during the
period
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of the next 3 years before standing at 4,000 in 2015. After that, the trend of shop closures remained stable from 2015 to 2017, before hitting a final decline of 3000
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in 2018. The
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of closed
shops
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started at nearly 6,500
shops
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in 2011, after which it saw a mild fluctuation before ending the first half of the
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examined at 6,500, but later dropped remarkably to around 500 in 2015. After that free fall, it experienced a significant upward trend, reaching over 5,000,
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remaining steady before ending the
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at approximately 5,200 closed
shops
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, shops, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Graph
  • Number
  • Shops
  • Closed
  • Opened
  • Fluctuation
  • Increase
  • Comparison
  • Trend
  • Period
  • Overall
  • Summarize
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