The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000
The table below includes statistics about
change
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a change
the change
of
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in
mode
of travel in England for the time span of 15 Correct article usage
the mode
year
between Change to a plural noun
years
years
1985 till 2000.
Correct article usage
the years
Overall
, there are 8 modes of travel shown in the table and the distance
travelled by each medias
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media
or
either decreased or increased after that specific time period.But Correct word choice
apply
Total
Correct article usage
the Total
distance
travelled by the sources increased in 2000 as compared to 1985
From the available data in the table, it is evident that more people had
travelled Unnecessary verb
apply
through
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by
cars
, Fix the agreement mistake
car
long
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long-distance
distance
bus and taxis in year
2000 Change the article
the year
compare
to 1985. Wrong verb form
compared
Distance
travelled by each of these modes increased by 1600 miles
, 68 miles
and by
25 Change preposition
apply
miles
respectively in duration
of 15 years. Correct article usage
a duration
Similarly
usage of other sources of travel like train has Add a comma
,Similarly
also
increased during this
interval
On the other hand
, distance
covered by Local Bus, bicycle and through walk decreased in the year 2000 Correct article usage
the distance
compare
to 1985. Wrong verb form
compared
This
may be due to
available of more comfortable and easy sources of travelling. Usage of local bus
decreased by 103 Fix the agreement mistake
buses
miles
, bicycle
by 18 Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
miles
and distance
covered through walking by 18 miles
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