the chart below shows the total number of mintues in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories

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provided chart illustrates three different kinds of telephone calls which were calculated by the total number of

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, in the UK from 1995 to 2002.

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, it can be seen that two kinds of calls were performed by using a fixed line,

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one was carried out by a mobile.

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, in 1995 local calls were the most popular because they made above 70 billion

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, which was a huge amount compared to others.

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to that, local calls remained to increase slightly until they reached a peak, at 90 billion

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, in 1999,

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; they started to decline till they stood up, in 2002, at the same amount of

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as it began. Regarding national and international calls , in 1995 people made around 37 million

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of them. After, that these calls elevated gradually, and they stopped, at about 60 billion

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, in 2002. So, the difference between them and local calls reduced to be only 10 million

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, in 1995 the using of mobiles to make calls was very low in comparison to others, at about 2 million

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, but its use rose slightly till a sudden increase, in 2002.

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the chart below shows the total number of mintues in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories

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