the chart below shows the total number of mintues in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories

the chart below shows the total number of mintues in billion of telephone calls in the UK divided into three categories
This
provided chart illustrates three different kinds of telephone calls which were calculated by the total number of
minutes
, in the UK from 1995 to 2002.
Overall
, it can be seen that two kinds of calls were performed by using a fixed line,
whereas
the
last
one was carried out by a mobile.
To begin
, in 1995 local calls were the most popular because they made above 70 billion
minutes
, which was a huge amount compared to others.
In addition
to that, local calls remained to increase slightly until they reached a peak, at 90 billion
minutes
, in 1999,
then
; they started to decline till they stood up, in 2002, at the same amount of
minutes
as it began. Regarding national and international calls , in 1995 people made around 37 million
minutes
of them. After, that these calls elevated gradually, and they stopped, at about 60 billion
minutes
, in 2002. So, the difference between them and local calls reduced to be only 10 million
minutes
.
Furthermore
, in 1995 the using of mobiles to make calls was very low in comparison to others, at about 2 million
minutes
, but its use rose slightly till a sudden increase, in 2002.
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