The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new Zeland in 2003 and 2013.

The two charts show how the online shopping

sales

for retail sectors in New Zealand changed over 10 years. They compare the percentages of online

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different retail sectors in New Zealand throughout the reported period. It is noticeable that ,for three of the sectors,over

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proportion of online transactions. At 23% we can see that the travel sector accounted for the majority of online

sales

in 2003, but

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percentage dropped to 29% by 2013 .Across the same 10-year period,as an increasing number of people chose to purchase films and music online ,we can see that transactions went from just 21% to 33%, making it the retail sector with the highest

overall

share of the online market. Another striking change was the portion on

sales

of clothes. In 2003, the clothing industry boasted an impressive 24% of total online

sales

in New Zealand .

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, by 2013, the figure had fallen considerably to 16%. Interestingly, the internet

sales

of books overtook

sales

of clothes,

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books still represented only 22% of the market%.