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Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes of this? What effects will this have on society?

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Nowadays, an increasing number of
criminals
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 commit
further
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 crimes after realizing from
prison
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. It makes people feel disturbed near former
criminals
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. In
this
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 essay, I will examine the causes of
this
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 phenomenon and its effect on
society
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.
To begin
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 with, many prisoners become more cruel because of what they get in
prison
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. During the day in
prison
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, they can be bullied or get violent with their fellow prisoners.
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, they
also
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 get pressure from the warden
prison
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.
For instance
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, if
criminals
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 do wrong on small things, they can get easily attacked by warden prisons. By getting attacked and bullied by
surroundings
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their surroundings
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,
criminals
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 become angry and unfair.
This
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 feeling can lead them to make
criminals
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 plan for the future.
As a result
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, the rate of crime increases as soon as
prison
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 is released. Meanwhile, there are some effects of
this
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 phenomenon on
society
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. The first effect is people feel unsafe and uncomfortable. It will be hard for citizens to accept former
criminals
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 in
society
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.
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, they feel afraid of being hurt not only near the former
criminals
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 but
also
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 the family of former prisoners. For illustration, parents will ask their children to avoid the member family of former
criminals
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. The next effect is can not be trusted by
society
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. By having a bad label in
society
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,
society
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 will feel hard to believe in former prisons in many aspects
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 as giving them jobs. Former
criminals
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 will feel so hard to find jobs.
Consequently
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, they can not
fulfill
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fulfil
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 their needs.
To sum up
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, it is believed that former
criminals
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 can do
further
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 crimes easily. It affects people's perspectives on them. It makes
society
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 feel unsafe and uncomfortable near them. It
also
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 makes them untrusted by
society
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that
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which
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 affects the availability of jobs for them.
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