It is necessary for
children
to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early stage
punishment
is significant to assist them learn the distinction. I totally agree with
this
statement, and I would like some punishments can
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by
parents
and
teachers
including,
parents
can
control
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childrenChange preposition
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of
technology
, and
teachers
can punish
children
by
reduceChange the verb form
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their marks.
To begin
with, I totally believe
is
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method to teach
children
what
rightAdd a missing verb
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and wrong.
This
is because
sendCorrect subject-verb agreement
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clearAdd an article
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message
forChange preposition
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children
that indiscipline
behaviour
is wrong, which
this Correct pronoun usage
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can deter
children
commit unacceptable
behaviour
.
For example
, In the UK
teachers
punish
children
who make misbehaviour
byChange preposition
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physicalsChange the noun form
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punishments.
Therefore
,
numberCorrect article usage
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of bullying and indiscipline in the UK
decreaseCorrect subject-verb agreement
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in schools.
, through
punishment
children
can learn from their mistakes what
correctAdd a missing verb
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and incorrect, which
this
meanReplace the word
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punishment
can correct the
behaviour
of
children
.
As a result
,
punishment
can contribute to
makeChange the verb form
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our society less
violenceReplace the word
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.
, I would like to suggest some forms of
punishmentsFix the agreement mistake
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canCorrect pronoun usage
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takenChange the verb form
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by
parents
and
teachers
.
Regarding Change preposition
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parents
,
parents
can punish their
children
by
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usageCorrect article usage
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of
technology
namely, smartphones,
computersCorrect word choice
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.
This
is because
children
in recent times often spend a considerable time in front
these modern Change the determiner
this modern technology
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technology
in order to play video games.
Consequently
, by
controlReplace the word
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usageCorrect article usage
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of
technology
children
will learn they make
wrongCorrect article usage
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things. When it comes to
teachers
,
teachers
can punish pupils who commit indiscipline
behaviour
by
reduceChange the verb form
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their grades in
curriculumAdd an article
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.
For example
, In the Uk
there are 20 % of marks for every
subjectsChange to a singular noun
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on
disciplineAdd an article
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of
children
.
To sum up
, I strongly believe
punishment
is extremely important to correct
behaviourCorrect article usage
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of
children
, and I recommended some actions for
and
teachers
to punish
children
namely,
control
limitCorrect article usage
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of
usage
of
technology
, and reduce the marks of
children
on
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.