The bar chart shows information about the favorite subjects of students from two middle schools, school A and school B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The provided bar graph illustrates information about the most disliked class is
among
pupils of Change preposition
apply
school
A and Fix the agreement mistake
schools
B
who like subjects in
the percentage scale. Change preposition
on
Overall
, school
A's students
seem to be interested indoor classes. However
, students
of school
B
tend to play sport
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sports
outdoor
.
In detail, the Replace the word
outdoors
students
eight in ten of school
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the school
A
Add a missing verb
have A
favorite
sport . Change the spelling
favourite
On the other hand
, the remaining four subjects preference of
under 20 Change preposition
apply
percent
. Among them, drawing Change the spelling
per cent
class id
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class'd
specially
dislike. Replace the word
especially
that is
nearly nine in ten studentes
dislike Correct your spelling
students
subject
. And Correct article usage
the subject
favorite
of rate are Math and Science Fix the agreement mistake
favorites
for
10 Change preposition
at
percent
and about 20 percent
respectively.
When it comes to school
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the school
B
pattern. School
B
's pupils five in ten are the best favorite
subject of Change the spelling
favourite
drawing
. And they Add an article
the drawing
also
enjoy literature over 40 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Also
Add a comma
,
a
science. That subject is Correct article usage
apply
hate
Wrong verb form
hated
for
Change preposition
by
almost
Correct your spelling
most
students
.But, pupils fovor
Math about 20 Correct your spelling
favour
percent
.Change the spelling
per cent
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