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the bar chart shows the percentage change in the share of international students among universityy graduated in different canada in provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.

the bar chart shows the percentage change in the share of international students among universityy graduated in different canada in provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.
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The provided bar graph illustrates information
the
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 change in the number of graduated international
students
 in Canada areas from 2001 to 2006 with data presented on a percentage scale.
Overall
, the number of
students
 who graduated in Canada increased by more than in 2001. In detail, in 2001 and 2006 ,
universities
 in New Brunswick were the most popular. And,
universities
 in Nova Scotia are too . In 2001,
universities
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university
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graduated
Wrong verb form
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students
 in Alberta and British Columbia had almost the same percentage about 8%. But,
universities
 in British Columbia
were
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significantly increased with graduated
students
 by about 15% in 2006.
Universities
 in Alberta
incresed
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increased
 just by 5%.
In addition
,
universities
 in Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, Ontario had almost the same
the
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apply
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number of graduated
students
 since 2001. Their figure was about 8% , 8% , 7% in 2001 and around 13%, 13%,
12
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and 12
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% in 2006 respectively.
Also
,
universities
 in Quebec had many graduated
students
,
However
, their graduated
students
 go up by just 3%. The
universities
 had the lowest rate of
increased
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 among all the
universities
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, universities with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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