the bar chart shows the percentage change in the share of international students among universityy graduated in different canada in provinces between 2001 and 2006. Summerise the info by selecting the main features, and making comparision where relavent.
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The provided bar graph illustrates information
the
change in the number of graduated international Change preposition
on the
students
in Canada areas from 2001 to 2006 with data presented on a percentage scale. Overall
, the number of students
who graduated in Canada increased by more than in 2001.
In detail, in 2001 and 2006 , universities
in New Brunswick were the most popular. And, universities
in Nova Scotia are too . In 2001, universities
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university
graduated
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graduate
students
in Alberta and British Columbia had almost the same percentage about 8%. But,universities
in British Columbia were
significantly increased with graduated Unnecessary verb
apply
students
by about 15% in 2006. Universities
in Alberta incresed
just by 5%.
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increased
In addition
, universities
in Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, Ontario had almost the same the
number of graduated Correct article usage
apply
students
since 2001. Their figure was about 8% , 8% , 7% in 2001 and around 13%, 13%, 12
% in 2006 respectively. Correct word choice
and 12
Also
, universities
in Quebec had many graduated students
, However
, their graduated students
go up by just 3%. The universities
had the lowest rate of increased
among all the Change the form of the verb
increase
universities
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