the diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The process diagram illustrates how

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is produced from

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, the production of

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consists of seven different steps starting with planting

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canes

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and ending with dehydrating and cooling the

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. The first step of making

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is to grow

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cane trees on the ground which

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time approximately one year to one year and a half to fully

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. Once they are ready to be harvested, there are two options

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cutting down the

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. One is to use the machines and the other is to use the human resources. After that, putting the

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into the squeezing machine to separate the solid parts and the liquid part from each other.

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taking only the juice part to purify by

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it through the limestone filter. Next step, the juice will be boiled until it evaporates and becomes

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cane syrup.

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the syrup needs to be centrifuged so that the crystal is set apart. The

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step is to let the crystal dry and low at heat so

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it is called ‘

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