the diagram shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

The process diagram illustrates how

sugar

is produced from

sugar

canes

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.

Overall

, the production of

sugar

consists of seven different steps starting with planting

sugar

canes

and ending with dehydrating and cooling the

sugar

. The first step of making

sugar

is to grow

sugar

cane trees on the ground which

take

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time approximately one year to one year and a half to fully

grown

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. Once they are ready to be harvested, there are two options

of

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cutting down the

sugar

canes

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. One is to use the machines and the other is to use the human resources. After that, putting the

sugar

canes

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into the squeezing machine to separate the solid parts and the liquid part from each other.

Then

taking only the juice part to purify by

pour

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it through the limestone filter. Next step, the juice will be boiled until it evaporates and becomes

sugar

cane syrup.

However

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the syrup needs to be centrifuged so that the crystal is set apart. The

last

step is to let the crystal dry and low at heat so

finally

it is called ‘

sugar

’