In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?In spite of advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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been a lot of progress in agriculture, a huge number of people around the

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are still suffering from

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. In my opinion, because these developments are limited to industrialized

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, we are still struggling

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catastrophe, and we need international actions to tackle

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vital

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has several reasons.

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, most of the

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in

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field are made in developed

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based on official statistics, most of the hungry population of the

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are settled in Asian or African

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as India or Sumaila,

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these

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do not have access to these

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, and we still face

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catastrophe in these regions.

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, even if the mentioned nations, had had access to the scientific agricultural methods, they would not be able to use them, because implementing these programs requires a lot of money to obtain needed machines,

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as huge tractors or complex irrigation

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, which are not affordable for

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poor

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, they cannot utilize these

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, are not able to address the

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efficiently. Some plans can be applied to tackle

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international problem.

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, international organizations,

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as FAO or UN can design applicable and suitable plans in terms of both agriculture

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and education to face

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problem.

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, people all around the

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can help these nations,

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by donating money to trustworthy organizations.

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, the monopoly of producing some vital agricultural products,

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as wheat or corn should be out of some limited

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countries

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hands, like Canada or USA,

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all the people around the

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can obtain these products

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reasonable Prices and overcome

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in their societies. In conclusion, I believe that, because the

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in farming are not accessible to the main

countries

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, which struggle

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hunger

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with hunger

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, we still could not overcome

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crisis; and we need international cooperation between both organizations

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and

world

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powers to tackle

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issue

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.