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In some countries, more peoplt the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

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Nowadays more
people
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 show interest in their
place
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 of
resident's
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 background.As a new trend,
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it's
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also
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suggests
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 some ways in order to make it done. To start with various
reasons
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 behind
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higher
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 level of awareness among
new
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the new
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 generation can play an important role. To clarify, young and
well educated
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people
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 usually are more likely to be curious about historical subjects and when it comes to their
place
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 of living,
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curiousity
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curiosity
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the
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 want to seek out
reprecussions
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repercussions
 involved in leaving the
place
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 by previous owners, see if they can deal with
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reasons
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 they may face as well or they want to feel more connected with owners. Another probable reason is they may believe in luck, fortune or hearsay.
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Consequently
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 they tend to scrutinize every
details
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 of
building
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the building
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 in order to restrain
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the possibilities
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possibilities
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 of living under bad luck. There are some ways
people
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 can find to pave
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their
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 way in that respect.
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 there is a chance of investigation among older
neighbors
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especially
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 in remote areas or suburbs. Mainly because conventional
people
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 are more likely to get to know each other
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 safety
reasons
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 or they may simply want to make friends in
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 areas. In urban areas and huge buildings
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 there is a chance to question about building's history by asking for information from real
etates
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estate
 companies since
these information
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are
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 more likely to be mentioned in contracts.
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, various
reasons
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 can elicit
people
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's desire to wonder about their
place
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 of
resident
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residence
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 history and asking for information from
neighbors
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neighbours
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 is one way
can
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that can
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 be beneficial in
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 respect.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • historical significance
  • property value
  • cultural heritage
  • sense of belonging
  • restoration projects
  • original integrity
  • legal concerns
  • safety concerns
  • structural problems
  • natural disasters
  • contamination
  • community engagement
  • neighborhood pride
  • preservation
  • notable figures
  • architectural styles
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