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Some people think that newspaper will provide more information than some people think media will provide more information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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At the present age, it is argued that traditional methods are
more
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preferable,
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 others prefer materials shared in media.
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 essay will agree with the latter statement because the transmission of
information
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 by sources
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 as TV and the Internet is being more accessible.
Newspaper
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 has been a practical way to provide people with a vast range of
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 for decades
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 of depth of coverage. Newspapers mostly provide reliable reporting and analysis of current events since many established newspapers generally have reputations for journalistic standards, giving access to verified
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 rather than websites. Take one of the famous newspapers as an example, USA Today, circulated to every state in the country, allowing citizens to receive a trustworthy picture of happening.
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, conservative methods of delivering
information
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 are more convenient in dealing with the abundance of materials.
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, media platforms give more opportunities, including engagement in discussions. It means that Its general access fosters a sense of community and participation by receiving feedback and sharing articles in networks.To illustrate, apps like Facebook are
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 one of the publishing platforms, where people are able to find like-minders and interact, related to a specific theme. In terms of reliance, the issues of incorrect data will be soluble if people interact with official and verified sites. All things considered,
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 articles published in the newspaper pages differ by reliability level, media outlets can considerably impact
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communication’s advancement. In my opinion, innovative new technologies will replace the conservative methods, leading to the stagnation of
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 field.
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