The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Overall
, the pie chart illustrate
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illustrates
proportion
of male and female Add an article
the proportion
workers
who are working in a
three different sector in a Correct article usage
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country
a
and Correct article usage
apply
country
B
.
In country
a
, more than half percentage of male Capitalize word
A
workers
at
56% worked for service. Similar Change preposition
apply
pattern
have Fix the agreement mistake
patterns
seen
for Add a missing verb
been seen
country
B
workers
at significant
rate of 65% in the segment. Add an article
a significant
However
, work in country
B
seems to have focused on industry
at 32% Add an article
the industry
then
agriculture
sector prizing low at only 3%. Correct article usage
the agriculture
Whereas
male workers
from country
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the country
a country
a
contributed 29% Correct article usage
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in
agriculture and 15% Change preposition
to
in
industry.
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to
On the other hand
, in country
a Add an article
the country
have
fairly managed ratio between employment on survey and agriculture at 49%, and 43% remain Unnecessary verb
apply
remain
8% with less popularity for industrial Remove the redundancy
apply
working
. Replace the word
work
Although
the majority of part at 88% of service work preferred
by females from Add a missing verb
is preferred
country
b
, follow followed by 11% in industry where is 1% of working contribution in females for farming, heaven country
b
respectively.Submitted by user349953 on
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