The supplied map gives data on the developments that were at the seaside resort of Templeton from 1990 to 2005
The map illustrates the developments at the seaside resort of Templeton over a fifteen-year period, between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that they constructed new facilities for daily life, public transportation, and logistics.
To begin
with, the houses in the north part of the resort were replaced with multi-floored accommodations. There is also
a new smaller multi-floored building beside the lake. Below these amenities, there was a brand new supermarket and another apartment neighbourhood demolishing several houses.
On the other side, across the river, they cut the trees and add new houses. The house and tree below a school were removed and became clear land. The parking space and railway station remain unchanged. In addition
, a factory was developed to remove the parking spaces near the train station. Finally
, on the beach, there is a dock for using a ferry,
and a path which separates the sea and the land.Remove the comma
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