the bar chart shows about female and male academic member staff in 2012

the bar chart shows about female and male academic member staff in 2012
The bar chart showed the proportion between male and female academic
staff
members of major universities with different
faculties
in 2012.
Overall
from seven
faculties
, male
staff
have more percentage at four
faculties
, there at Engineering, Business, Science and Law.
While
female
staff
have more percentage at three
faculties
, there Education, Arts and Medicine.
According to
the graph, Engineering
faculties
are dominated by male
staff
, with a gap of more than 80% for male and almost 20% for female
staff
.
However
, another gap
also
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shown in the Education
faculties
, Female
staff
has almost 75%
while
Male
staff
only count about 25%. On the other
faculty
, Business
faculty
and Science
faculty
are
similarly
dominated by male
staff
at about 65% and female
staff
at only 35%, followed by Law
faculty
that are dominated by males at about 60% and 40% female
staff
.
By contrast
,
besides
the Education
faculty
, female
staff
only have slight differences in Art
faculty
about 55% female AND 45% male, followed by Medicine
faculty
which only have a thin difference of about 3%.
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