You recently went on a holiday tour for a week. Your friend lent you a guide book. Write a letter to thank your friend. In your letter, tell your friend about the holiday explain how the guidebook was helpful tell him/her when and how you will return the guide book You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sam, How have you been? I just came back from
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Phuket
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trip, it was totally fun and a big thank you for lending me your book -
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101! I was very lucky that my one-week vacation in
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was full
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sunshine, not even a single drop of rain. The hotel I stayed
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lovely, centrally located and comfortable. I did 3 times of
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throughout the trip – in Phi Phi, Samusa and Bugi Island. The water was all crystal clear and even spotted a massive turtle! Your book explains
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Island very well. Not only it covers the main attractions,
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but it also
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provides guidance to
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hidden gems
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as Jungle trekking with sunset view, local Thai cuisine cooking class, etc.
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, I checked out 2 of the local eateries it introduced and totally had a feast! Now I would like to return your book to you. May I know if I can post it back to you? Don’t worry
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the postage fee, that’s on me. Hope to hear from you soon! Warm Regards, Julie
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