Online education is becoming increasingly popular. Many university students are choosing to study online instead of face to face. Do the advantages of distance education outweigh disadvantages?

Internet

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has transformed our lives in many ways. Online education is one of the good examples. It comes with

benefits

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the benefits

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of reducing travelling

time

,

opportunities

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and opportunities

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to do international courses. On the

down side

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,

students

can feel isolated and it prevents them from bonding with other

students

meaningfully. In

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we will discuss both the advantages and disadvantages of online learning. The biggest convenience internet brings is

the

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connectivity and

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time

. When it comes to online learning,

students

can learn from home and

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saves up a significant portion of

time

for travelling.

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allows

students

to have more

time

and use

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other productive tasks.

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, online learning opens the door

of

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possibility

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the possibility

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for

students

to do courses

that

is

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conducted in

other country

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another country

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without having to present physically.

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is particularly helpful for working adults who continue learning about their profession which the course is often offered in other countries. With

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the working adult can juggle their day job and learning concurrently. In terms of disadvantageous, without meeting each other face-to-face,

students

often feel they are on their own in

this

learning journey. They feel isolated and

this

can be detrimental to their learning motivation.

In addition

, it is extremely challenging for

students

to form meaningful

bond

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bonds

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. Being together means

students

can interact, conduct group discussions or have lunch together which allows them to understand each other better.

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helps the

students

to form a better sense of camaraderie as well. In conclusion, there’s always two sides of a coin. In my opinion, the

advantageous

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advantages

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of online learning far

outweighs

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its disadvantageous and it will only continue to be more common to do online learning.