The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The diagram shows how Liverton docks change since 1980.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.
The diagram illustrates the significant change in Liverton docks from 1980 to current.
Overall
, by analyzing both maps, it is clearly shown that it has undergone significant transformations to establish modern amenities
such
as an educational centre, sailing club, kid's play area and museum. In 1980, the north part of the
river
had two warehouses. Between warehouses, was a crane. At the same time, the opposite
side
of the
river
had a warehouse and a crane, too. The
river
was the main road for ships. Nowadays, on the north
side
of the
river
, the left
side
is the education centre, which is a converted building. Next to the education centre is a new building, called 'Sailing Club'.
In addition
, there is a Kid's playing area.
Also
, building a ship museum which is located west of the
river
. At the same time, there is a bridge to link the north and south sides of the
river
,
while
the back of the bridge is a flood barrier which can protect the building.
Furthermore
, the south part of the
river
is a
river
walk, people can have leisure time there. Starting from the left
side
is a new Hotel. Next to the hotel, apartments are converted by the warehouse
while
there is parking on the right
side
.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words river, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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