In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Which one would be better, renting a

house

or just buying one?

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risen in some countries. Some believe

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ownership should be considered more important than just renting a

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are discussed.

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society.

Firstly

, it could be reasonable for some to believe that you must have your own

house

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could be a result of some social convention which believes that the status of a person is defined based on their properties.

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, many count buying a property as an investment, because

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land will always have its value. So,

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desirable for some to exchange their belongings into a

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society. The money spent on buying a

house

could be managed so that it would help a business grow. So if the governments could handle the inflation rate, more people are going to invest their money in businesses rather than houses.

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, one more thing that could be prevented is consumerism. As people live in rental houses, they tend to purchase

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unnecessary appliances, so

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if they ever wanted to relocate their job would be easier. In conclusion, some roots for a desire to buy houses are stated which could either be a tradition in some countries or just the need to look out for the future

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investments.

Although

having your own

house

have a lot of advantages

for example

the sense of comfort,

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society, and so it

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to be addressed by governments properly.