Some people think residents should keep their streets clean and tidy while others sy it is government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Road
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system
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one of the reasons, the development of the nation
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on
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. It is believed by some that its cleanliness is the responsibility of the
people
residents
whereas
others believe that
government
is the only one responsible for it. I believe that it is the duty of both the individual and the authority to maintain the hygiene and tidiness of the country.
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views in detail. On the one hand, the
people
who reside in the
area
can keep the
streets
in front of their homes or shops clean by taking initiatives
such
as putting garbage bins, sweeping and encouraging other
people
to do so.
This
will keep them healthy and will reduce
the
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pollution to some extent.
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, the
people
of a society in Amritsar
along with
their children fixed a day
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a week for cleaning the roads of the society,
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then
the health and the environment of that
area
has
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been better.
Thus
, it is always beneficial to maintain the hygiene of our
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to keep
the
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diseases away.
On the other hand
, it is the duty of
government
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to maintain
their
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area
. They can do so by enforcing laws related to tidiness and taking fine from
people
who throw their garbage in the
streets
. They can
also
encourage and inspire
people
of
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the
area
to keep the
streets
clean by taking specific measures.
For instance
,
government
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the government
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of Delhi hired hundreds of cleaning workers to clean the roads of the capital.
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,
government
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the government
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and the individual are responsible for maintaining their
streets
for the betterment
on
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one’s health and environment of the surrounding, which proves the fact that cleanliness is the key to
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the
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diseases away.
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