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The plan below show a school in 1985 and the school now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The given maps illustrate layouts of a school in the year 1985 and at present.
Overall
, it is discernible from the maps that there are new facilities,
such
 as a pool and a fitness centre, more classrooms and trees at the expense of the size reduction in playing fields and the main road. Notably, the school population has increased significantly over the course of 38 years starting from 1985. In 1985, the number of students was 1500. There was a big car park on the north side of the map, which was surrounded by a road connecting to huge playing fields in the south. In the west wing, there were classrooms, a small car park and a library. Whilst, there was a classroom clock including 2 storeys on the east.
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