Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid ,organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebritiesmake the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Organizations always seek international aid and
support
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from different
people
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. Though famous
people
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or celebrities help organizations and
support
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them to a greater extent it is a debatable topic whether
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problem
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the problem
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gets highlighted or the issue becomes less important and all attention goes to the celebrity.
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, Organizations specifically NGOs where the management always needs
support
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from the
people
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to address the
problem
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and draw some help for its resolution. Though International aid tends to help to a greater extent if the problems are bigger.
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, Recently there is an NGO named Yuva, that was seeking
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from a personality that would help them to reach a huge audience. There was an event set up and a celebrity came, the whole attention, media and questions revolved around her and
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problem
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was only discussed in a few lines.
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,
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problem
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the problem
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was not highlighted in print and digital media.
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, I believe good responsible famous
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take
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on a serious note and
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it with their heart.
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, Another event I attended
last
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month was of a celebrity who came with his complete team to an organization's office which was looking for some huge funding to distribute free sanitary pads to women. The person came with huge media houses and with his chequebook gave good
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to the management. She explains an emotional story and motivates
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for the same.
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, They gained huge international aid in 7 days only. In conclusion, Not all celebrities or famous
people
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understand the intensity of the
problem
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or issue. Maturity is required to attain good attention. So effective backing for the issue can lead to drawing greater help.
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