Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid ,organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebritiesmake the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Organizations always seek international aid and
support
from different people
. Though famous people
or celebrities help organizations and support
them to a greater extent it is a debatable topic whether problem
gets highlighted or the issue becomes less important and all attention goes to the celebrity.
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the problem
To begin
, Organizations specifically NGOs where the management always needs support
from the people
to address the problem
and draw some help for its resolution. Though International aid tends to help to a greater extent if the problems are bigger. For instance
, Recently there is an NGO named Yuva, that was seeking support
from a personality that would help them to reach a huge audience. There was an event set up and a celebrity came, the whole attention, media and questions revolved around her and problem
was only discussed in a few lines. Correct article usage
the problem
As a result
, problem
was not highlighted in print and digital media.
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the problem
On the other hand
, I believe good responsible famous people
take this
on a serious note and support
it with their heart. For example
, Another event I attended last
month was of a celebrity who came with his complete team to an organization's office which was looking for some huge funding to distribute free sanitary pads to women. The person came with huge media houses and with his chequebook gave good support
to the management. She explains an emotional story and motivates people
for the same. moreover
, They gained huge international aid in 7 days only.
In conclusion, Not all celebrities or famous people
understand the intensity of the problem
or issue. Maturity is required to attain good attention. So effective backing for the issue can lead to drawing greater help.Submitted by hiteshpaul on
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