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Write a letter to your local council that the street you are living in has become dirty lately.

#council #street
I hope
this
 letter
for
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 you in radiant health and the best of
spirt
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spirit
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. I am writing
this
 letter with the crucial purpose of
complaning
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complaining
, about The area where I live has been getting dirty lately.
This
 causes various inconveniences to people. On the one hand, in
first
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 important thing which should be mentioned is that we
have
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 not a trash can in our
neighborhood
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.
For
this
reason
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 our streets are becoming dirty. On the other side , There is a lot of garbage on our street.So cars cannot pass and
this
 leads to various traffic jams.I hope that a solution to
this
 problem will be found soon.
Finally
, having given the previous facts, I hope you will take
an
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immediate action in order to solve the issue
as well as
 look forward to hearing from you in the future.
Thus
 do not
hestitate
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me. Yours faithfully Sarvinoz
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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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