Many people hold the view that it is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do agree with this statement or not?

There is a debate that some
people
think that buying their
home
is apply better than renting it. In my opinion, I completely agree with that statement. The first and most important reason is that if
people
own their performance they will feel much more relief about money than rent for their
home
. Because they do not have to think about the money they must pay for their
home
every month.
For example
, some
people
usually worry about the cost of the apartment they must pay
at the end
of every month so they think a lot when they pay for something else. The next point is
also
very important I want to make that
people
will feel more comfortable when they are in their
home
which is owned by them. I will explain why.
Firstly
, they can do anything they want without the lamentations of their neighbour,
such
as
people
can sing karaoke or have some dogs or cats in their homes which is usually forbidden in apartments.
secondly
,
people
will not be controlled by some of the rules of the
home
which they rent like they must go
home
before 10 p.m or not to make a noise. In conclusion, I think if
people
have good economic conditions they should buy a
home
for their performance. Because it will make
people
feel more comfortable and not think so much about the money they have to pay for their
home
when they rent it.
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