Many people hold the view that is better to buy their home rather than rent it. Do you agree with this statement or not?

The majority of people claimed that it is better to

owning

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a

home

rather than

renting

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rent

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,

this

is

also

popular in many countries most

at

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in

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middle-age

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middle age

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. From my point of view, I agree with

this

method and will elucidate

in

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it in

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the following passages. First of all, owning a

home

let citizens do not pay

fee

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a fee

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for living each month,

this

is

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also

not lead to the fatigue of having to pay,

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and reduce

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reduce

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reducing

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stress. If they have their own

home

, there is nobody difficult

them

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for them

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about

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to

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save the facilities in that

home

,

that

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which

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may be really comfortable to live in.

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, people live in the

house

that they rent, they have to save all the facilities and keep it clean, sometimes the host

make

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makes

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troubles

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on

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them about do not decorate the

house

as

them

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they

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like. They have to live at the will of the owner.

Moreover

,

owing

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owning

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a

home

offers the ability to enjoy the independence and convenience of a comfortable lifestyle.

Secondly

, an

owning

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owned

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house

can be decorated as their dream

house

, unleash your creativity on that and

this

really

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is really

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amazing.

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, it

is

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is also known

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also

know that

the

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apply

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bath time is

the

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a

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wonderful time of the day, if they make their own bathroom as they want,

this

lead to their health by living

comfortable

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comfortably

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. Live in

the

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a

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rent

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rented

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house

,

apartment

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or apartment

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leading

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leads

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to

fee

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a fee

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increase each year but

this

is not sure that their salary would rise up,

this

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and this

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is very difficult to find

another

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other

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accommodation that

fit

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fits

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with

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apply

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their income in

the

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apply

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modern life. In conclusion, the desire to own a

home

instead

of renting one is understandable given

by

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the benefits it offers. It provides a sense of stability,

save

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saving

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money,

dream

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house

and the comfortable. So it can be seen that owning a

home

is one of the good ways to live and work in life.