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in the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless the only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passedengers

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All kinds of transportation
such
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 as cars, buses and trucks will have the
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 of
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 vehicles in the future. Individuals will not have the option of driving
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 using it on their transport. I believe
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 will have
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 chances to be a good option for
people
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. New
technology
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 will cause many problems in terms of the environmental sector and government spending will be affected by that.
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,
driverless
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 cars can look like a good idea if
people
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 think about it
;
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everything comes with a price. New
technology
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 has many issues, especially in the early stages.
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, some can argue that
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 you are a passenger in your vehicle
people
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 can do their work
while
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 waiting for their destination so it can cut losses. It is true but sometimes in the rear area of some
cities
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 it is hard to plot the map so to reach your point you need to direct the car every time you want to move. Meanwhile, the transportation sector is usually a public sector which means that the cost of creating
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 buses or trucks will affect the country's budget. Adding to
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,
people
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 will have
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 jobs and that leads
people
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 to ask the government to create more jobs.
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, nowadays most companies use
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such
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 as AI to help them to build their vehicles
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 goes as well for the
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 car.
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, it will cause many
environment
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environmental
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 problems
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 as
,
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 the waste of the chips and the need
of
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 new stones for
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 kind of
technology
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 will increase. In conclusion,
people
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 will at first like the idea of
driverless
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 vehicles.
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, in the long
run
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 the disadvantages will outweigh the benefits of it. There will be
people
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 losing their jobs and the environment will suffer as well.
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