in the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless the only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passedengers
All kinds of transportation
such
as cars, buses and trucks will have the technology
of driverless
vehicles in the future. Individuals will not have the option of driving while
using it on their transport. I believe this
will have less
chances to be a good option for Change the quantifier
fewer
people
. New technology
will cause many problems in terms of the environmental sector and government spending will be affected by that.
Despite
, Correct pronoun usage
thisDespite
driverless
cars can look like a good idea if people
think about it;
Change the punctuation
,
But
everything comes with a price. New Correct word choice
apply
technology
has many issues, especially in the early stages. However
, some can argue that while
you are a passenger in your vehicle people
can do their work while
waiting for their destination so it can cut losses. It is true but sometimes in the rear area of some cities
it is hard to plot the map so to reach your point you need to direct the car every time you want to move.
Meanwhile, the transportation sector is usually a public sector which means that the cost of creating Add a comma
,cities
driverless
buses or trucks will affect the country's budget. Adding to this
, people
will have less
jobs and that leads Change the quantifier
fewer
people
to ask the government to create more jobs. For instance
, nowadays most companies use technology
such
as AI to help them to build their vehicles that
goes as well for the Correct pronoun usage
which
driverless
car. Hence
, it will cause many environment
problems Replace the word
environmental
such
as,
the waste of the chips and the need Remove the comma
apply
of
new stones for Change preposition
for
this
kind of technology
will increase.
In conclusion, people
will at first like the idea of driverless
vehicles. However
, in the long run
the disadvantages will outweigh the benefits of it. There will be Add a comma
,run
people
losing their jobs and the environment will suffer as well.Submitted by wasanmansour33 on
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