Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is undeniable that there has been a growing tendency
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at
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, so
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some, it ought to be mandatory for
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to reveal the nutritional details of the served foods. Despite the fact that there are some drawbacks to mentioning the information about
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made at
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, in my personal opinion, the benefits outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand, comprehension of information related to the nutrition of
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prepared at
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by
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, who eat there, has so many beneficial effects on their health.
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, if
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are informed of the calories and ingredients of their meals, they would be more conscious to order foods, which do not have heinous impacts on their well-being. They,
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, opt to eat healthy
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, which are without high cholesterol and unsaturated fat. If,
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,
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have awareness of the amount of calories in fried fish, they would not order it.
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, the pitfalls of putting details related to the ingredients of foods in
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' menus should be considered. At present, restaurant owners most of the time offer music and a calm environment and
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usually go there to spend some quality time with their friends or family and relieve their minds. They,
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, do not want to be mentally
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  by the nutritional facts of their foodstuff and they just want to enjoy their meals. Taking Iran as an example,
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have been gaining popularity, especially among young generations, for socialising with their friends and the quality of meals is not important for them. In conclusion, weighing both sides of the argument I would say that the benefits of revealing nutritional facts of
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outweigh the drawbacks because of its productive effects on
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's health.
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nutritional information
  • Calorie count
  • Public health
  • Informed choices
  • Accountability
  • Dietary requirements
  • Logistics
  • Analyzing
  • Unhealthy ingredients
  • Consumer
  • Health outcomes
  • Gluten-free
  • Overemphasis
  • Comprehensive understanding
  • Dining experience
  • Clinical experience
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