The chart below shows the result of survey of patient who stayed in three different wards of a hospitals. It shows what percentage of the patients replied "very good" aout various aspects of their hospital ecperience.
The bar graph compares the proportion of
patients
who stayed in Holly, Maple
and Oak
wards and liked the different features of the ward
such
as Hospital staff, waiting time
, Quality
of time
, and Quality
of aftercare.
In general, the majority of patients
had a good time
in Holly ward
and were happy with all the services that were provided. On the other hand
, there were fluctuating responses for Maple
and Oak
Ward
.
To begin
with, most of the patients
enjoyed their stay at Holly Ward
. About 86% of patients
were happy with the hospital staff and their behaviour. Patients
were impressed with the waiting time
at holly ward
as about 75% agreed that it was very good. Patients
at Holly ward
were most happy about the quality
of treatment they received and the quality
of aftercare as 80% and about 78% respectively agreed that it was good.
In contrast
, maple
ward
and oak
ward
did not provide the patients
with the same quality
of facilities as they had received at holly ward
. As a result
, Maple
Ward
had the lowest satisfaction in hospital staff with just about 55% while
Oak
Ward
had only 67%. The patients
were not happy with the waiting time
as well. Only about 55% and 52% of patients
were happy with the waiting period at Maple
and Oak
Ward
respectively. The two wards did improve their quality
of treatment as 70% and 80% of patients
agreed that it was good. However
, the two wards were not able to provide the same satisfactory services with their quality
of aftercare.Submitted by abhaya2057 on
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