The chart below shows the result of survey of patient who stayed in three different wards of a hospitals. It shows what percentage of the patients replied "very good" aout various aspects of their hospital ecperience.
The bar graph compares the proportion of
patients
who stayed in Holly, Use synonyms
Maple
and Use synonyms
Oak
wards and liked the different features of the Use synonyms
ward
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such
as Hospital staff, waiting Linking Words
time
, Use synonyms
Quality
of Use synonyms
time
, and Use synonyms
Quality
of aftercare.
In general, the majority of Use synonyms
patients
had a good Use synonyms
time
in Holly Use synonyms
ward
and were happy with all the services that were provided. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, there were fluctuating responses for Linking Words
Maple
and Use synonyms
Oak
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Ward
.
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To begin
with, most of the Linking Words
patients
enjoyed their stay at Holly Use synonyms
Ward
. About 86% of Use synonyms
patients
were happy with the hospital staff and their behaviour. Use synonyms
Patients
were impressed with the waiting Use synonyms
time
at holly Use synonyms
ward
as about 75% agreed that it was very good. Use synonyms
Patients
at Holly Use synonyms
ward
were most happy about the Use synonyms
quality
of treatment they received and the Use synonyms
quality
of aftercare as 80% and about 78% respectively agreed that it was good.
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In contrast
, Linking Words
maple
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ward
and Use synonyms
oak
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ward
did not provide the Use synonyms
patients
with the same Use synonyms
quality
of facilities as they had received at holly Use synonyms
ward
. Use synonyms
As a result
, Linking Words
Maple
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Ward
had the lowest satisfaction in hospital staff with just about 55% Use synonyms
while
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Oak
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Ward
had only 67%. The Use synonyms
patients
were not happy with the waiting Use synonyms
time
as well. Only about 55% and 52% of Use synonyms
patients
were happy with the waiting period at Use synonyms
Maple
and Use synonyms
Oak
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Ward
respectively. The two wards did improve their Use synonyms
quality
of treatment as 70% and 80% of Use synonyms
patients
agreed that it was good. Use synonyms
However
, the two wards were not able to provide the same satisfactory services with their Linking Words
quality
of aftercare.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words patients, maple, oak, ward, time, quality with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 6 times.
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