the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.

the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
The maps compare the
road
routes to a
city
hospital in 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, the
City
Hospital in 2007 has a bus stop
while
in 210 there is none but a roundabout. The
car
park
both
staff
and public was situated at the same location,
whereas
in 2010, the public
car
park
and
staff
car
park
are located separately. There are two gates, one from the public
car
park
and the other from the
staff
car
park
, leading into the hospital in 2010. From the bus station, there are
also
two routes, both
connect
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connecting
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to the public and
staff
car
park
through the Ring
Road
, hospital
road
and
city
road
.
In contrast
, the
city
hospital in 2007 had only one gate located opposite the
car
park
and connects to the Ring lane, hospital roadway and
city
route.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words road, city, car, park, staff with synonyms.
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  • accessibility
  • dual carriageway
  • roundabout
  • traffic flow
  • multi-story car park
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian provisions
  • footpaths
  • traffic signals
  • construction phase
  • ambulances
  • carriageway expansion
  • traffic congestion
  • pedestrian crossings
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure development
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