Reading books is quite a popular among the people, some people believe that television is a good source of information. do you think the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages .
In
this
fast pace world technology developing day by day, even in education
system. Some Add an article
the education
people
prefers
reading printed work Change the verb form
prefer
while
others think that television
and other source
of media is Change the wording
another source
other sources
good
source Add an article
a good
to
information. There are pros and cons Change preposition
of
of
each. I strongly believe that Change preposition
to
books
are far better and beneficial to invivdual
in Correct your spelling
individuals
individual
various
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a various
way
than TV. Fix the agreement mistake
ways
This
essay will further
discuss my views.
To begin
with , books
are cheaper and easy to carry. From poor
to reach anyone can buy Correct article usage
the poor
books
as
Change preposition
at
its
affordable price. Other than that Change the word
an
its
easy Correct your spelling
it's
carry
. To illustrate, Fix the infinitive
to carry
people
can carry books
to work even when they are travelling. Moreover
, printed work has some amazing good vocabularies
. Someone who wants to attain a good knowledge about various Fix the agreement mistake
vocabulary
vocabs
, Replace the word
vocabularies
complex
Correct word choice
and complex
sentances
and Correct your spelling
sentences
english
Change the capitalization
English
grammer
Correct your spelling
grammar
books
are
the best source of that.
Analysing and explaining Correct subject-verb agreement
is
further
, print copies have differnt
Correct your spelling
different
varrieties
from Correct your spelling
varieties
litrature
to animation Correct your spelling
literature
books
. To exemplify , someone who wants to collect information about litrature
Correct your spelling
literature
they
can have Correct pronoun usage
apply
large
amount of data on that. Even reading Change the article
a large
books
helps to
better sleep Correct pronoun usage
us to
alon
with that it helps us to reduce stress.
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and
On the contrary
, television
have
more drawbacks than benefits. Change the verb form
has
Deffinately
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Definitely
television
have
audio-visual effects that Change the verb form
has
attracts
Change the verb form
attract
majority
of Add an article
the majority
a majority
people
however
it cause
Change the verb form
causes
a
addiction. Other than that watching too much Correct article usage
apply
television
can lead to depletion in eye sight
and behavioural Correct your spelling
eyesight
chane
in Correct your spelling
change
individual
. Fix the agreement mistake
individuals
Negative
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The negative
influance
of Correct your spelling
influence
influences
tv
can affect Add an article
the tv
person
in Add an article
a person
the person
bad
way. Change the article
a bad
Hence
, increases in crime
rate.
to recapitulate, all the arguments aforementioned above that Correct article usage
the crime
television
have more negative impacts rather positive on person
Add an article
a person
the person
while
by reading books
person can gain more knowledge as well as
other health benefit
. Change the wording
another health benefit
other health benefits
people
might choose reading
Change the verb form
to read
books
rather watching tv in future
Correct article usage
the future
beacuse
of the effects on Correct your spelling
because
body
and mind.Correct article usage
the body
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