In modern society, some people argue that schools become unnecessary as children can study at home via the Internet. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people think that

students

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unnecessary to go to the classroom,

instead

of they can

study

on platforms like

:

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zoom,

azota

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azote

,… In my opinion, I disagree with that and I

belive

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believe

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study

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studying

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on

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at

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school

always

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is always

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better than

study

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studying

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on platforms.

Firstly

, studying at home via the internet

make

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sudent

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student

students

cannot focus on the

lesson

because they

study

on pc or smartphone

that

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make

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makes

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distration

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distraction

. Student can surf the internet

chat

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and chat

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with their friends

while

lecturer

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the lecturer

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study

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studies

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the

lesson

.

Secondly

, after

teachers

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the teachers

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end up the

lesson

,

student

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students

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have many

the

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apply

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question to

to

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apply

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ask teachers.

It

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isIt

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very easy to do

this

in the real classroom but in the platform, it

so

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is so

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different. We would not understand the

lesson

if we studied that no discussion.

Thirdly

, we go to

the

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school not only

study

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to study

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hard but

also

play

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to play

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with friends and develop

myself

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ourselves

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. In the home, we cannot make

friend

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friends

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so we feel alone

that

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due to

some disease about social.

To sum up

, I think that studying via the

internet

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Internet

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as

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is as

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not good as

study

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studying

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on

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at

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school