Write a letter to your neighbour because you have some problems about his car park.In your letter -welcome him/her in your society -explain your problem give me some suggestions

#neighbour #car #park #-welcome #society #-explain #suggestions

Dear neighbour I hope you all are well. I am writing

this

to talk about my concern regarding

unappropriate

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inappropriate

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parking from longtime. From

last

couple of

weeks

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,weeks

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I have

notice

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noticed

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that some of

car

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the car

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has been parked in

wrong

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the wrong

a wrong

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way which

make

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makes

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hard to park another car. That's why so many times I have

been

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apply

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parked my car

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apply

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near

petro

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Petro

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station and

also

couple

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a couple

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time

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times

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a did a paid parking as well.

Also

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it's not only

issue

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an issue

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with me , Childers are

also

unable to play in tiny

space

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. So in the resolution of

this

issue, we should arrange a meeting in which we can find

solution

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a solution

the solution

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. Thank you Regard Nagma

Submitted by nagmasheliya97 on Wed Aug 16 2023

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The Closing

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Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

113 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Write a letter to your neighbour because you have some problems about his car park.In your letter -welcome him/her in your society -explain your problem give me some suggestions

The Closing

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