Write a letter to your neighbour because you have some problems about his car park.In your letter -welcome him/her in your society -explain your problem give me some suggestions

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Dear neighbour I hope you all are well. I am writing

this

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to talk about my concern regarding

unappropriate

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inappropriate

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parking from longtime. From

last

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couple of

weeks

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,weeks

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I have

notice

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noticed

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that some of

car

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the car

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has been parked in

wrong

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the wrong

a wrong

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way which

make

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makes

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hard to park another car. That's why so many times I have

been

Unnecessary verb

apply

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parked my car

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apply

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near

petro

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Petro

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station and

also

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couple

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a couple

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time

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times

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a did a paid parking as well.

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Also

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,Also

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it's not only

issue

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an issue

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with me , Childers are

also

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unable to play in tiny

space

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spaces

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. So in the resolution of

this

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issue, we should arrange a meeting in which we can find

solution

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a solution

the solution

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. Thank you Regard Nagma

nagmasheliya97Wed Aug 16 2023

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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3
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

113 words

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Write a letter to your neighbour because you have some problems about his car park.In your letter -welcome him/her in your society -explain your problem give me some suggestions

The Closing

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All mothers and fathers should be made to take childcare courses. Do you agree with this point of view?

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Some people believe that by killing someone society is also making a crime, so, that why death penalty should be forbidden. Life in prison would be a better punishment. Do you agree or disagree?