Today more people are overweight than ever before. What in your opinion are the primary causes of this? what are the main consequences of this issue.
Nowadays, the number of overweight
people
is increasing than the past ever. In my opinion, I agree with this
issue because of the technological revolution and convinient
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people
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is making people
who are more
fatter and some more consequences of Change the word
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this
issue.
For the primary reason, technological
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the technological
that
changed Correct pronoun usage
apply
working
behaviour of Correct article usage
the working
worker
which Fix the agreement mistake
workers
was
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apply
people
as well. In the lastest
decade of Correct your spelling
latest
twenties
century, most of working outside jobs had been Add an article
the twenties
tranffered
to working in offices by the Correct your spelling
transferred
convinient
technology, Correct your spelling
convenient
specially
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especially
computer
. Fix the agreement mistake
computers
People
did not need to went
out for Change the verb
go
tranffering
papers, they could trade information by Correct your spelling
transferring
the
e-mail. Correct article usage
apply
Moreover
, televisions, radios, and internet
were the best technological productions for them to Correct article usage
the internet
communicated
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communicate
which
updated information Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
as news at home instead
they moved out. In addition
, most outdoor activities such
as sports, picnic
, camping,etc. were replaced by TV programs. Fix the agreement mistake
picnics
For instance
, according to
the news on the
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people
in Vietnam who
spend their time playing computer games or watching Correct pronoun usage
apply
televisions
than before because It is easy to Fix the agreement mistake
television
approchable
.
For Correct your spelling
approachable
the
other reasons, When the Correct article usage
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convinient
needs Correct your spelling
convenience
in
human is highly in growth, that's why many fast food companies follow Change preposition
of
this
trend to serve eating
needs of Correct article usage
the eating
people
. Meanwhile, home-cooked is not the best solution for them in
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on
the
busy day. Correct article usage
a
Hence
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of calories Add an article
an amount
the amount
such
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that keep inside Correct your spelling
substances
human
body for a long time and Add an article
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difficulty
to put Replace the word
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it
out without Correct pronoun usage
apply
do
activities or Wrong verb form
doing
play
sports. Wrong verb form
playing
This
has led to people
to more fat ever. For example
, the rate of overweight and fat people
has increased rapidly in the last
few year
until now.
In Conclusion, the technological revolution and Change to a plural noun
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convinient
needs Correct your spelling
convenience
such
as eating fast food in people
that are main
causes to make Correct article usage
the main
people
are
fat, bringing unforeseeable consequences Unnecessary verb
apply
about
human health and serious problem diseases.Change preposition
for
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