some people believe that it is best to accept the bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

people are divided about the idea of whether individuals should attempt changing their

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unsatisfaction

circumstances or they have better to strive for better life qualities. In

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intend to discuss both opinions.

However

, I firmly agree with the latter view. on the one hand, the proponents of dealing with unfavourable situations argue that people can not expect everything

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along with

their desires because humans are

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unsatisfied

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per se. they never can lure their heart

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in order that they always crave

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the best and it is

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their instinct.

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, all individuals have experienced the situation that they efforted overwhelming to gain

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achievement in their life and after a

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they underestimated

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or they created new goals to achieve it.

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is the reason why some believe that we should adapt ourselves to

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unpleasant circumstances

in order to nurture

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to find happiness in little things.

on the other hand

, opponents opine that we live in

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competitive

era and making efforts for achieving high places

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inevitable. today

as a result

of consumerism and

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advertisement

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many people endure many difficulties to improve their wealth status as

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aware that it has become

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for society.

for instance

, it is observable in our societies that girls are more

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interested

in well-off men. going on with

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flow would cause many mental issues

such

as depression and isolation.

to sum up

, I reiterate that living in today's era

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rules which can guarantee our psyche's health slightly. attempting for better life qualities is one of

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