some people believe that it is best to accept the bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both these views and give your own opinion
people are divided about the idea of whether individuals should attempt changing their
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However
, I firmly agree with the latter view.
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per se. they never can lure their heart Fix the agreement mistake
creatures
greed
in order that they always crave Change preposition
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for
the best and it is Change preposition
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on
their instinct. Change preposition
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for example
, all individuals have experienced the situation that they efforted overwhelming to gain Linking Words
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or they created new goals to achieve it. Linking Words
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unpleasent circumastances
in order to nurture Correct your spelling
unpleasant circumstances
our selves
to find happiness in little things.
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ourselves
on the other hand
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a competetive
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competitive
are
inevitable. today Correct subject-verb agreement
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in well-off men. going on with Correct your spelling
interested
contrary
flow would cause many mental issues Correct article usage
a contrary
such
as depression and isolation.
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