The pie charts below provide some informaion about employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

The pie charts below provide some

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information

about employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.

Overall

, there are two charts by sex and occupation.

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the amount of male clerical or related employees

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31

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.

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managerial and professional category is 36

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male and nearly 30% female (29%).

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the craft or similar pattern appears to be slightly different. It has the greatest number of male employees (24%)

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only 3

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of females. Nearly as many men as women, 27 and 26

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of other manual workers

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can see in

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). Fewer

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than

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are in

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. It is 9 % females and six

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males.

It is clear that

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patterns have males and females in

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sphere.